Still behind, but I did manage to write more today.

I'm not actually extraordinarily happy with it, but that could just be because I'm tired and I have other things on my mind. The ignition switch in my car is busted, and a replacement will be like $150...$150 I would rather be spending on equipment for my bike. Like a bike rack.

:P

But anyway, here's the update. Maybe I'll like it more tomorrow...or maybe I'll wonder what the hell I was thinking when I wrote it :P